tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-903719451434423563.post2451120920753429470..comments2023-05-23T07:34:15.205-05:00Comments on The Ancillary Muse: Weekend Writing Warriors #8sunday (RO)(ER)Rose Andersonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04429566802562925080noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-903719451434423563.post-14018915927572791992015-06-29T19:51:27.907-05:002015-06-29T19:51:27.907-05:00Wonderful. I like the juxtaposition between the Ca...Wonderful. I like the juxtaposition between the Cardinal and toddler. Excellent excerpt, Rose. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-903719451434423563.post-61626214411002181832015-06-28T17:29:38.198-05:002015-06-28T17:29:38.198-05:00Very nice personification of the contrasts between...Very nice personification of the contrasts between wealth and poverty, need and greed.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-903719451434423563.post-7176480262506020852015-06-28T11:27:52.780-05:002015-06-28T11:27:52.780-05:00Always best to avoid temptation... except, of cour...Always best to avoid temptation... except, of course, when it's more fun not to!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-903719451434423563.post-31222298462759879252015-06-28T10:22:23.971-05:002015-06-28T10:22:23.971-05:00Felt as if I was there watching the passersby too ...Felt as if I was there watching the passersby too - excellent descriptions! Enjoyed the realism of the excerpt...Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-903719451434423563.post-1775556542407246742015-06-28T08:53:16.033-05:002015-06-28T08:53:16.033-05:00Great use of the setting to show us more about the...Great use of the setting to show us more about the character.E.D. Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06919218250424892502noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-903719451434423563.post-668052077364141462015-06-28T08:06:55.666-05:002015-06-28T08:06:55.666-05:00Your detail and your impressions are wonderful. W...Your detail and your impressions are wonderful. What a strong way to show a character's heart!Eden "Kymele" Mabeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01550337993392791643noreply@blogger.com