tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-903719451434423563.post5242325046142472789..comments2023-05-23T07:34:15.205-05:00Comments on The Ancillary Muse: Weekend Writing WarriorsRose Andersonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04429566802562925080noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-903719451434423563.post-76655431953661556852014-04-20T12:25:20.019-05:002014-04-20T12:25:20.019-05:00Now that's quite a descriptive scene, painterl...Now that's quite a descriptive scene, painterly in its details. Desire so thick you can almost touch it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-903719451434423563.post-39704718683815785572014-04-20T07:15:42.792-05:002014-04-20T07:15:42.792-05:00Excellent details and great tie-in with the art. G...Excellent details and great tie-in with the art. Great scene setting and tension building.Susan Stuckeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14742093200745409339noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-903719451434423563.post-25269645617006554072014-04-13T17:34:10.972-05:002014-04-13T17:34:10.972-05:00LOVE the sensory details: moistened lips, darkened...LOVE the sensory details: moistened lips, darkened irises, and circling the rim of the glass with her fingertip. You've created a lot of delicious sexual tension in these sentences.Sandra Nachlingerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16906884446237370105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-903719451434423563.post-15076785526694721632014-04-13T15:33:31.998-05:002014-04-13T15:33:31.998-05:00Thanks :)Thanks :)Rose Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04429566802562925080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-903719451434423563.post-82706947168871273572014-04-13T15:18:47.442-05:002014-04-13T15:18:47.442-05:00I really understood the chemistry between them. Th...I really understood the chemistry between them. The part where she rubs the rim is a nice touch. Great, sensual snippet!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-903719451434423563.post-33536735257798173402014-04-13T13:30:15.803-05:002014-04-13T13:30:15.803-05:00Thanks Millie. :)Thanks Millie. :)Rose Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04429566802562925080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-903719451434423563.post-70303108648766882922014-04-13T13:30:00.474-05:002014-04-13T13:30:00.474-05:00Thank you, Veronica. :)Thank you, Veronica. :)Rose Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04429566802562925080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-903719451434423563.post-61866913543062306432014-04-13T12:24:18.318-05:002014-04-13T12:24:18.318-05:00Ok WOW, that was excellent and held so many wonder...Ok WOW, that was excellent and held so many wonderful images and so much elegant prose - loved the excerpt!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-903719451434423563.post-33813064002550611812014-04-13T11:54:08.923-05:002014-04-13T11:54:08.923-05:00Very sensual eight!Very sensual eight!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-903719451434423563.post-37800750370736861302014-04-13T11:05:57.688-05:002014-04-13T11:05:57.688-05:00You're a sweetheart for the compliment, Charma...You're a sweetheart for the compliment, Charmaine. I am humbled. Thank you.<br /><br />Too bad you still don't live in this neck of the woods. We could do coffee at some little cafe and pick each other's brains. Rose Andersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04429566802562925080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-903719451434423563.post-29654678443410676812014-04-13T10:09:50.265-05:002014-04-13T10:09:50.265-05:00No one writes it better, Rose. Your choice of word...No one writes it better, Rose. Your choice of words, descriptions different from all others. I'm learning from you. At my age, way older than you -you're an inspiration.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.com